Much of your work has been related to work done in college, though you have demonstrated that you been working towards aims that will help you in getting into employment.
Proof reading still needs to be worked on, you say you have improved, but your blog entries have also needed proof reading.
P8 achieved
Friday, 22 December 2017
Tuesday, 19 December 2017
Parwar Abdullah 9 (Skills that I need to get for future jobs)
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In my PDP there are three things that I really want to improve myself on and one is my leadership which I think that I am doing really good in and that is because we had an activity in groups of A,B,C and D and I was in charge of the teams and one of the team members wasn’t talking, so I made him join in as a leader and to show my determination that I’m talking part of activity and these skills of a leadership an really help me in a job that I want in the future. They where two aims that I wanted to reach and that was to be confident in myself when I am a leader. The aims that I had last week I did achieve them this week when we were doing the acitvity I improved myself and overcame my aims that I had on my PDP and what I said I was going to do last week. However I still do thing that I need to work more on my leadership when we are on a time limit. The determiaton confidents and the leadership will all help me in my future career as well.
The next target that was on my PDP which is probably one of the most impotant thing and that is the time limit or the deadline that the work needs to be handed in and I want to hand all of my work in before the Tuesday 9th January.
In my PDP there are three things that I really want to improve myself on and one is my leadership which I think that I am doing really good in and that is because we had an activity in groups of A,B,C and D and I was in charge of the teams and one of the team members wasn’t talking, so I made him join in as a leader and to show my determination that I’m talking part of activity and these skills of a leadership an really help me in a job that I want in the future. They where two aims that I wanted to reach and that was to be confident in myself when I am a leader. The aims that I had last week I did achieve them this week when we were doing the acitvity I improved myself and overcame my aims that I had on my PDP and what I said I was going to do last week. However I still do thing that I need to work more on my leadership when we are on a time limit. The determiaton confidents and the leadership will all help me in my future career as well.
The next target that was on my PDP which is probably one of the most impotant thing and that is the time limit or the deadline that the work needs to be handed in and I want to hand all of my work in before the Tuesday 9th January.
Tuesday, 12 December 2017
Parwar Abdullah 2 (Barriers in Conversions and to overcome them)
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This work showed me how to avoid the barriers in a conversation and how it can help me with my communicating skills so we did some activity's in class showing us how to overcome them and they have been really effective and helpful to me and I have used them to get better and I also used my PDP to help me improve has well. It also really benefited me because I learnt not to mumble and to speak clearly and more confident so that others can understand me. The way that it helped me was the activity of group task that we did and we had to speak to other people and each time it was with different barriers. I need to do this because in the future I will speak to people in a group and the activity really helped me and know I am able to avoid the barriers. So I really do feel more confident in having a conversions with people and I feel it will really help me in the future.
For my next aim in next week I will try and improve my proof reading because that is an area that I need to focus on.
This work showed me how to avoid the barriers in a conversation and how it can help me with my communicating skills so we did some activity's in class showing us how to overcome them and they have been really effective and helpful to me and I have used them to get better and I also used my PDP to help me improve has well. It also really benefited me because I learnt not to mumble and to speak clearly and more confident so that others can understand me. The way that it helped me was the activity of group task that we did and we had to speak to other people and each time it was with different barriers. I need to do this because in the future I will speak to people in a group and the activity really helped me and know I am able to avoid the barriers. So I really do feel more confident in having a conversions with people and I feel it will really help me in the future.
For my next aim in next week I will try and improve my proof reading because that is an area that I need to focus on.
Friday, 8 December 2017
Parwar Abdullah 1 (My PDP and aims)
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My PDP really helps me to improve and helps me for my future career so I have made 5 targets that would help improve me for my career path in the future because I will always have targets to complete and they will make me active and also make me try harder to reach those targets and I think that this targets will improve me. Its also going to benefit me because it helps me to be even more prepared so that I have an idea of whats ahead and the next thing to do. I have also set important dates on mt PDP to have this finished and I wanted to do this because I want to be pushed harder to meet my targets and the aims. I have done these targets and It has helped me improve in many ways and also my targets have been very effective and had a massive effect one me.
For next week my aim will be to try and overcome the barriers in a conversations so I know how to avoid any barriers.
My PDP really helps me to improve and helps me for my future career so I have made 5 targets that would help improve me for my career path in the future because I will always have targets to complete and they will make me active and also make me try harder to reach those targets and I think that this targets will improve me. Its also going to benefit me because it helps me to be even more prepared so that I have an idea of whats ahead and the next thing to do. I have also set important dates on mt PDP to have this finished and I wanted to do this because I want to be pushed harder to meet my targets and the aims. I have done these targets and It has helped me improve in many ways and also my targets have been very effective and had a massive effect one me.
For next week my aim will be to try and overcome the barriers in a conversations so I know how to avoid any barriers.
Parwar Abdullah 4 (Producing a CV)
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I have made a really good improvements to my CV and I am getting a better hang of it I have put it into detail and talked about how it will help, also I did say that I will make a better CV last week and I finally have done it and I did write more then one CV because on my PDP it said that I need to more then one and this is to make sure that the quality was really good and to a stranded level and I had my tutors read my CV to make sure that they where all good and I wanted to see if they would gave me a reference. The CV is really important because it defines what kind of a person you are and when I did the CV it helped me to improve my punctuation and my grammar so "yes" by doing the CV, I did improved myslef even more. Last week I said that I will achieve this when I did my "Proof Reading".
For my next aim is the attendance to lessons and how I need to improve my Attendance and talk about having an alarm so I can come to lesson 5 minutes earlier.
I have made a really good improvements to my CV and I am getting a better hang of it I have put it into detail and talked about how it will help, also I did say that I will make a better CV last week and I finally have done it and I did write more then one CV because on my PDP it said that I need to more then one and this is to make sure that the quality was really good and to a stranded level and I had my tutors read my CV to make sure that they where all good and I wanted to see if they would gave me a reference. The CV is really important because it defines what kind of a person you are and when I did the CV it helped me to improve my punctuation and my grammar so "yes" by doing the CV, I did improved myslef even more. Last week I said that I will achieve this when I did my "Proof Reading".
For my next aim is the attendance to lessons and how I need to improve my Attendance and talk about having an alarm so I can come to lesson 5 minutes earlier.
Parwar Abdullah 6 (Improvement with Communications)
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The one thing that I did to improve myself in communicating was that I presented information to a large group of people and I used "overcoming the barriers" and I was more confident in communicating to other people because I have improved my communicating skills and I did this in a activity by talking to each other and with that activity I was able to present myself to the group of people correctly and I had the right attitude and the language and that shows that I have achieved my aim of work in a group. My communication skills also came in really will when I did my CV because it helped out a lot and also shows that I am improving myself and also reaching for my aims at the same time So thanks to the activity in lesson and my PDP I was able to improve.
My next aim for next week well be that, I will try and improve my Team work and how it will help me improve.
The one thing that I did to improve myself in communicating was that I presented information to a large group of people and I used "overcoming the barriers" and I was more confident in communicating to other people because I have improved my communicating skills and I did this in a activity by talking to each other and with that activity I was able to present myself to the group of people correctly and I had the right attitude and the language and that shows that I have achieved my aim of work in a group. My communication skills also came in really will when I did my CV because it helped out a lot and also shows that I am improving myself and also reaching for my aims at the same time So thanks to the activity in lesson and my PDP I was able to improve.
My next aim for next week well be that, I will try and improve my Team work and how it will help me improve.
Parwar Abdullah 8 (Presentations Skills)
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I have done my presentations on an actor Dwayne Johnson and I talked about he did because the presentation was to talk about what the do and how it gave and effect on people and Dwayne Johnson was a person who inspired a lot of people and to keep move forward and that is what I did I moved forward and improved myself my reaching for my targets which was to speak clearly and have the confidants to stand up in front of the whole class. I did do this and when I went up to the board everyone was listening and at that moment I knew that I had to speak clearly and I did because before that we had a little activity in a group talking about our presentation and that activity really gave me a boost in helping me improve my confidents and to speak clearly and when I went up and I did it, I talked about my presentation in a clear voice, I stood up straight and I looked at the audeince as well. The thing that I do need to improve is not to have a piece of paper with information on, so I do need to work on some areas still.
That week I had another presentation that I did in english and I did improve myself by not having the information on a peice of paper and I did all of the presentation by myself and I am confident on doing presentations without paper in my hands and I can look the audenice more now because I have got more understanding kniw then ever.
For the next aim on my PDP is I need to work on some of my general skills that I need like the determination or the confdenice and the leadership and I’m going to talk about how they improved me.
I have done my presentations on an actor Dwayne Johnson and I talked about he did because the presentation was to talk about what the do and how it gave and effect on people and Dwayne Johnson was a person who inspired a lot of people and to keep move forward and that is what I did I moved forward and improved myself my reaching for my targets which was to speak clearly and have the confidants to stand up in front of the whole class. I did do this and when I went up to the board everyone was listening and at that moment I knew that I had to speak clearly and I did because before that we had a little activity in a group talking about our presentation and that activity really gave me a boost in helping me improve my confidents and to speak clearly and when I went up and I did it, I talked about my presentation in a clear voice, I stood up straight and I looked at the audeince as well. The thing that I do need to improve is not to have a piece of paper with information on, so I do need to work on some areas still.
That week I had another presentation that I did in english and I did improve myself by not having the information on a peice of paper and I did all of the presentation by myself and I am confident on doing presentations without paper in my hands and I can look the audenice more now because I have got more understanding kniw then ever.
For the next aim on my PDP is I need to work on some of my general skills that I need like the determination or the confdenice and the leadership and I’m going to talk about how they improved me.
Tuesday, 31 October 2017
Parwar Abdullah 7 (Team Work/Photoshop/asking for help)
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Working in a group of people is important because It can improve my confidants and it can help me if I am nervous so when we did it in a group of people trying to make hand made telephone kind of thing by using some string and some cups to do it. I did enjoy it and at the same time I wasn't nervous and that shows that I have improved myself by being confident in my group and believing them. One of my PDP aims was to overcome me being nervous and when we did the activity I got over that and that is showing that I have improved and that I can do more things and for example me asking for help when I need it and on the same week I overcame both things and that was just by work with the group on Photoshop and I wasn't scared to ask for the help of my friends and the teacher. For this week I have achieved my targets and improved a lot just by working in a team I over came being quiet and also I asked for help for the first time and that shows that I'm progressing over the weeks and I have successful reached my aim.
For my next aim that I will try and reach and get that aim will be on the presentations skills and my target is to be more confident and speak clearly.
Working in a group of people is important because It can improve my confidants and it can help me if I am nervous so when we did it in a group of people trying to make hand made telephone kind of thing by using some string and some cups to do it. I did enjoy it and at the same time I wasn't nervous and that shows that I have improved myself by being confident in my group and believing them. One of my PDP aims was to overcome me being nervous and when we did the activity I got over that and that is showing that I have improved and that I can do more things and for example me asking for help when I need it and on the same week I overcame both things and that was just by work with the group on Photoshop and I wasn't scared to ask for the help of my friends and the teacher. For this week I have achieved my targets and improved a lot just by working in a team I over came being quiet and also I asked for help for the first time and that shows that I'm progressing over the weeks and I have successful reached my aim.
For my next aim that I will try and reach and get that aim will be on the presentations skills and my target is to be more confident and speak clearly.
Tuesday, 17 October 2017
Parwar Abdullah 10 (Building a PC while on a time limit (deadline)
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My final aim on my personal development plan is the deadline and the deadline is very important because that is when you have to hand in all of the work that you have done for an example I have to give all of my work in before Tuesday 9th January. Deadlines also can be for a group of people or just one and has another example we did an activity on building a PC and it was in a group of 3-4 people and I was in charge of who gets to do what and that activity really helped me in my leadership effectively also we did have a time limit and we did thanks to my past activity in groups and as a team leader we pulled it off showing that I have improved myself and that I can do things independently or in group of people. The deadlines I use to have problems but now I don't and this is because I do go after lessons to the library to do more work so that I can meet my deadlines and move on. So that does show that I have reached my final aim and that I can now focus 100% on my work being done.
This is the final of my blog as it has been 10 weeks that I have been doing this and seeing how I have improved my self over those week and it also all of these things will be very helpful to me in my future career.
My final aim on my personal development plan is the deadline and the deadline is very important because that is when you have to hand in all of the work that you have done for an example I have to give all of my work in before Tuesday 9th January. Deadlines also can be for a group of people or just one and has another example we did an activity on building a PC and it was in a group of 3-4 people and I was in charge of who gets to do what and that activity really helped me in my leadership effectively also we did have a time limit and we did thanks to my past activity in groups and as a team leader we pulled it off showing that I have improved myself and that I can do things independently or in group of people. The deadlines I use to have problems but now I don't and this is because I do go after lessons to the library to do more work so that I can meet my deadlines and move on. So that does show that I have reached my final aim and that I can now focus 100% on my work being done.
This is the final of my blog as it has been 10 weeks that I have been doing this and seeing how I have improved my self over those week and it also all of these things will be very helpful to me in my future career.
Parwar Abdullah 5 (Attendance to the Lessons/Classes)
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I have been looking at my attendance and I'm trying to improve but my attendance is 100% every time, and the reason I want to improve my attendance is because I am always arrive late to class and I have thought of a way to make me come to my lessons and I have also put this in my PDP and that is to have a alarm that is going to wake you up and over the week I have gotten better at waking up and going to lessons, so I really do thing that I have improved my time management and coming to lesson on time as well and this is because every time I am late I miss something at the beginning of the lesson. Even in a job they will want you to turn up on time, so this past week I have turned up and have done my work to catch up.
For my next aim which is for next week, I will work on my commutations skills and how it will improve me and my work.
I have been looking at my attendance and I'm trying to improve but my attendance is 100% every time, and the reason I want to improve my attendance is because I am always arrive late to class and I have thought of a way to make me come to my lessons and I have also put this in my PDP and that is to have a alarm that is going to wake you up and over the week I have gotten better at waking up and going to lessons, so I really do thing that I have improved my time management and coming to lesson on time as well and this is because every time I am late I miss something at the beginning of the lesson. Even in a job they will want you to turn up on time, so this past week I have turned up and have done my work to catch up.
For my next aim which is for next week, I will work on my commutations skills and how it will improve me and my work.
Parwar Abdullah 3 (Proof reading)
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I think that I have fully improved on my proof reading because I started to go over my work just has I said I would in my PDP and I said that I would take my time in reading it and get a friend to read for me and I did that and it all when the way that I wanted and at the beginning my proof reading was bad but now I have improved my proof reading and I did this by going over one of my work that is on the barriers in a conversation and one had the corrected words and spelling and one of them had lots of mistakes and I went over it because in my PDP aims was to go over it and improve it and I have improved it because I could spot the errors and I tried to correct them all and I did learn from my mistakes so now if I did a document or a presentation I will be able to do it without mistakes. This has been effective because it has increased my English and grammar skills over the week and I did go online to complete some spelling and grammar test and I did it over and over util I got it right. Overall proof reading my work and going online to complete a task as really helped me improve.
So for my next aim I will try and improve my CV and try to make it better and make more CV to show that I have improved.
I think that I have fully improved on my proof reading because I started to go over my work just has I said I would in my PDP and I said that I would take my time in reading it and get a friend to read for me and I did that and it all when the way that I wanted and at the beginning my proof reading was bad but now I have improved my proof reading and I did this by going over one of my work that is on the barriers in a conversation and one had the corrected words and spelling and one of them had lots of mistakes and I went over it because in my PDP aims was to go over it and improve it and I have improved it because I could spot the errors and I tried to correct them all and I did learn from my mistakes so now if I did a document or a presentation I will be able to do it without mistakes. This has been effective because it has increased my English and grammar skills over the week and I did go online to complete some spelling and grammar test and I did it over and over util I got it right. Overall proof reading my work and going online to complete a task as really helped me improve.
So for my next aim I will try and improve my CV and try to make it better and make more CV to show that I have improved.
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